 Elehyn 2004-06-24 . chapter 1Hello!
It's just a suggestion I give you but you should write the summary of your fic in French and not just write "Comforts from the Unexpected In French. Translated by Valerie." It doesn't attract the readers a lot because, perhaps, they think that you've made a mistake while posting your fic. It's not the first time that authors post a fic in the wrong section. If you want, I've translated the summary that you've made for your fic in English so, it is :
"Alors qu'un incendie se déclare chez les Dursley, Harry est enfermé dans son placard et, dans leur hâte de fuir, il est complètement oublié de sa famille... Que va-t-il lui arriver ? Tentative du suicide, mauvais traitements."
Here we go. If the summary is too long in French for fanfic, you can erase "Tentative de suicide, mauvais traitements" (Suicide attempts, abuse) and write them in the warning. The subject of your fic seems to be very interesting and attractive, it would be a pity if your fic wasn't read because of this.
In any case, I wish you all the best for your fiction :)
Big kisses,
Elehyn. |