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Jennifer
2009-11-15 . chapter 31
OOH MY ** GOD! If that isn't the best written, creative story on I might have to eat something deadly and disgusting and not meant to be eaten. I loved the plot line, the way the time flowed and breaked, the development of the characters, ALL OF IT! Feel free to continue writing whatever you want, I can't wait to read it!
.Darkness.of.the.Day.
2009-11-12 . chapter 30
ah i cant believe ive read this all again...
I have finished it (again) btw but only lets you review once to each chapter...
I love this story so bad
I want to be Virginia <3
I know you're not around any more and i dont know if you still check you reviews but if you do, this was amazing <3 :)
XxX
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
Holy mgisdjffks, that was totally unexpected.
Haha. I am still laughing from when I was thrown off by Malfoy kissing Ginny.
evillygood
2009-10-30 . chapter 1
i've read this story a long time ago and forgot to add it to my faves!! I'm just saying a sequal wouldn't be a terrible idea... :)
hogwartsismydrug
2009-09-19 . chapter 25
will they survive? bc i WILL kill you if they don't survive!! thanks! love you!
hogwartsismydrug
2009-09-12 . chapter 8
NO! it TOTS didn't suck I LOVE THE BATHROOM! it is so my dream bathroom! the description was really good and i'm only usedd to reading NC-17, so it was actually really good. I just have a question: Why do they like the pain during sex? Is it a fetish or is it because of what is in their blood? thanks!
Cynnical-Belle
2009-06-20 . chapter 9
If it makes you feel any better i love reading the french you use. its funny.
it tells me that there is actually someone out there worse at french than i am.
mon chou was my favourite. i'm guessing someone had told you it means my cabbage, but they do actually use it in france. especially mon petite chou, my little cabbage.
love your story. havent gotton to the end yet but normally i forget to review so i thought i would jump ahead. i think there needs to be more differenciating between blaise and draco, thats more or less my only advice.
emenem10
2009-06-09 . chapter 21
"Maybe it's because she isn't a complete animal." Hermione offered indignantly, and Lauren sighed.
Shouldn't it be Lycelle?
yrenne
2009-06-02 . chapter 31
I know, I know,) I'll be just another person to tell you that this story is something utterly beautiful and extraordinary. However I'm still doing it:*
I don't really know how you did it.
Plot, characters, twists, literally everything... everything is just perfectly balanced.
One of the Best stories I've ever read, if not the Best:* !!You wrote an amazing novel worth to become a book.
Btw, I started reading it by pure accident, but I couldn't get away from it and still kept reading like crazy:)
It was couple of months ago and these days I still read some parts when I wish to fly away from reality.
I think that's all of my incoherent thoughts..
You are an extremely talented writer.
Take care*
.Darkness.of.the.Day.
2009-05-30 . chapter 31
woww...
you'll probs noticed i replied after reading the first chapter in december but i kind of forgot about it until last weekend and since ive done nothing but read !
it's truly amazing. Best fanfic i've ever EVER read.
it's one of those few fanfics which have their own plot; they dont just follow the one the author previously laid out for them and like with a good book, i REALLY didnt want it to end...
this was amazing really.
you're such a talented writer...
xx
KonekoKitz
2009-04-20 . chapter 31
Holy **. There is no way for me to put into words how absolutely ** amazing this was. All of the twists, jolts, drama, just everything was simply... perfect. I loved it. I, I don't know. I can't explain it, but this story, fanfic, it was breathtaking. I would love for it to go on forever, never ending. I would love to read it again and again and again and again but I don't want to waste the finesse of it all. Like reusing something too much taints it, and this just doesn't deserve, can't, be tainted. It is brilliant. Amazing. Superb. And thousands upon thousands of other synonyms all put together, there is no one word that could describe it. Not one. I wish there was a sequel, a continuation, something. I hope there is a spark of inspiration that just has wrapped until it is written. Oh how I wish. But, if it does not happen, I only hope you know that this is absolutely without a doubt my favorite fic I've ever had the utter pleasure of reading.

Much love and thanks
~Kits
st.als.twilighters
2009-04-02 . chapter 31
Stories been finished for 'bout fives years, and I'm reviewing. LOL.

Anyhow, I loved this story, forst DM/GW/BZ I've read. I gotta see if you have more stories!
Even if you'll most likely never read this!
smaginn
2009-02-20 . chapter 31
this was brilliant, this story is fantastic, im just upset for lycelle, but i love this story!
.Darkness.of.the.Day.
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
woah awesome! only just read the first chapter (got a long way to go =P) and it's awesome! Love it ;]
Snowgoose1070
2008-12-10 . chapter 1
I have just started rereading this story for the umpteenth time over the years, and I'm still in awe. This has to be one of my favorite stories of all time; once, in high school, I even printed out a hard copy so I could bring it with me everywhere! The years have passed- I've now graduated college- but still come home to this story every few months. Thank you so much for writing, and I sincerely hope that whatever caused you to put your writing on hold has been a happy event, instead of anything negative. Once again, from me and all of the others for who your story is a much needed escape from reality, thank you.
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