Oh, please don't be sorry! I loved it! Nok'mijar? I really like that. You have originnal ideas and an uhibited (SP?) imagination. please add more! I would really love to read more. Your story is in my favorites, and I'm watching you for updates. :3

Don't worry, it was a good chapter. More informative than anything else, but it gave us a lot of answers to stuff. Just one question. Is Talya healed now? 'Cause she didnt seem to be hurt anymore by morning. And Rachel too. What happened to her wounds? But great chapter, continue!

Nice story so far. I'm finding hard to pick out things that I think you could improve on, so I'll comment instead on how well you can shift perspectives. It's relatively easy to tell who's talking just by the language. Oh, wait, I did think of one thing that you could improve. Update sooner, please!

i'm hooked! can't wait for the next chapter!

LOL, I forgot to mention this earlier: Maybe you'd get more reviews if you allowed unsigned ones? It's quite a bother to log in all the time.

Very nice fanfic, quite fascinating so far... although it starts off quite abruptly, is it a sequel to another fanfic? Either way, please continue :)

kool. nice story line, keep going!

Pretty good. I like the way you weren't afraid to add the gore. (though I'm wishing I didn't have a good imagination...) It is curious as to why she kept her wounds, but I'm guessing that you'll explain this in later chappies. Can't wait for the next chapter.

P.S. I'm your soul brother? Yay! -fan dance-