Amazing

SHIT this is wonderful. Just so mind blowing.The way you capture their characters . . . it's just so perfect.

I'd love a sequal, but I won't pressure you. It's absolutely fantastic the way it is, but to see where John and Danial go from here, would be just wonderful as well.

This is a powerful piece. I'm not generally a great slash fan, but this uses the slash to advance the characters and plot in a very clever way.

Poor confused, lonely and lost Johnny.

I always felt that "Fragile Balance" was much too short. This is deeply satisfying.

This is incredible!

This was so cool. I hope you write further adventures of John O'Neil bi-sexual, confused, self-loathing, but still somehow with a spark, with potential. Make it a cross-over if you have to, or continue with star gate and/or the OCs you created.

Wow, that was a really impressive piece of writing and for me that's saying something because I normally hate slash - but somehow you got it to work.

Thanks for the fic. I was disappointed in the neat and tidy ending myself. Think John will ever be able to accept and loose some bitterness?

I don't usually read stories of this type, but something about this one just called to me. I loved it! I want to know what happens next? sequel maybe?

That was a really good piece of writing, and a necessary continuation of the episode. I always thought Jack couldn't possibly want to go back to high school - who would after all? And this explains his feelings and draws in his past experience really well.

And Jack/Daniel! yay!

thanks, I enjoyed.