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Catmint
2006-04-30 . chapter 5
This is a good chapter. I like your portrayal of Draco and Lupin; I think you've got both down very well. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Death-Muncher
2006-01-11 . chapter 4
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!
Your story is amazing! I love the way you've portrayed Draco! He's so resentful and hateful towards everyone.
You can just tell that he wants to run away or something. Can anyone say "attempted murder"? it kinda seems inevitable...
anyways... please please update soon!
Catmint
2005-10-13 . chapter 4
So far this is an EXCELLENT story. Great style, good characterisation, good plot. I have no complaints whatsoever about this fic and I'm looking forward to more!!
Towie
2005-09-17 . chapter 1
WO! great style. except im half expecting a draco/herm-o-ninny ship... uh oh haha
Sever13
2005-07-26 . chapter 4
I loved it! I feel so sorry for Draco, I hope that he figures out something. I almost expect him to start cutting himself, or something. He seems like he is pretty desperate right now. Anyways, I love it, and your grammar is great! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please continue as fast as possible!
helloitsme-again
2005-07-26 . chapter 4
Can't wait to read more! Narcissa dead too huh?? poor draco.. I think Ron sucks, but than again I never really liked him so it could just be me.. keep it up and I'll be chacking back ^_^
Caladre
2005-07-10 . chapter 3
Well, it's been ages since I've reviewed anything here...let's see if I remember how it works...ah yes...

Great Work! I've enjoyed this story greatly...I don't know if I can add a lot in terms of suggestions...beyond, y'know, the usual "Please continue"...but I'll put my heart behind that one...Keep it up. :) Please.
samhaincat
2005-06-22 . chapter 3
Yes it was rather short but loved that lupin and snape made their peace. I like that Hermione is attempting to draw Draco into conversation. Draco, Ron and Ginny are no doubt going through grief of their own. Draco who so idolized his father is he ever going to realize what a foolish choice they made. I hope Hermione will be there to witness it when it all hits him. I hope Snape will act a little parental towards him.
Looking forward to more...
EverWings
2005-06-22 . chapter 3
Great story, please update soon! You're grammar and vocab are very good. I hope you'll make the other chapters longer then chapter 3 tho! lol :D

~*~KaRa~*~
Jhaylin
2005-05-16 . chapter 2
Oh my god! Poor Draco! Ron's so mean to him!

Please update soon.:)
samhaincat
2005-04-24 . chapter 2
WOW! Another excellent chapter. I'm so glad you decided to continue. Poor Draco. Will we find out what happened to Narcissa? I'm kind of hoping she's dead so Draco and the rest will eventually grow closer. Love that Hermione was so comforting. Will we get to see a bit more of Snape also?
stella maynard
2004-09-07 . chapter 1
How angsty! And how you! But you just had to go and kill of half my favorite characters, didn't you? Ah, well. Draco's still there. Very nicely done, my friend.
Phlossy
2004-07-01 . chapter 1
Humm... on my computer the button is grayish, but if you say it's periwinkle, it's periwinkle. This story rox. I like it. It's full of ansty goodness. Humm... now I want chocolate...
Jadyn Potter
2004-06-28 . chapter 1
So good, so good. It's sad how most one-shots never get very many reviews.
Catmint
2004-06-19 . chapter 1
*sniffle* So sad. And so incredibly fantastic. Wow. That took my breath away.
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