Yes, this is very good. Extremely realistic, and quite dark.

Good Job!

Beautiful! Loved it :)

Angsty and dark, indeed. This plays out in a way that I imagine many relationships do. It seems to convey the emotions realistically. Great job!

A strange couple, with a lot to do. But I think they could make it.

Very good line: "Neither of them says the word love. Cho never really did believe in fairy-tales."

Beautiful. *sniffle*

Angsty. Emotionally trying, but a good fic, especially in a darker mood!

Love Chibi AlaniaX

Oh how very sad and yet poetic

Kepp going with the story, it sounds like you've already got loads of story lines in your head. Nice beginning.And, what about the end?

mm.. angst

ive been in the mood for it.

thanks

jessi

LOL It's me! I liked this story; is there one that came before it so I could have a little more background? It seems to be a trademark of yours, switching from person to person. It's neat. I do it, but not as often. Anyway, you're a good writer! Keep writing. BTW, I have read all of your other stories. They're all good. :) I'm too lazy to review them all. ;-)

there's only one thing I can think of to describe this (sad aw sound)

That was good:) I can say little more than that and still be accurate

So bittersweet, so beautiful. Cannot stand character bashing myself, so I just love how you take such an underappreciated character as Cho and treat her so respectfully, so kindly. The descriptions are vivid and beautiful, as always in your fics. And very believable and in-character.

Great job. ;)

Love,

_Meg.