So far this is an intriguing chapter although it is confusing as to where Harry's thoughts start and end sometimes, maybe next time you could use italics? Also Gryffindor has a 'y' and no second 'i' :)

aw that was short, sweet and cute... :)

aww true love DRaco is so sweet wish he was my love lol

greta chapter he saved draco but you put brown eyes looked up to the sky harry has green eyes rememeber

ugh why would harry date ron? he s ron ugh and poor draco hes much more sexy hope harry can get to him before its too late ron is a git

ooh they kissed brilliant i hope they dont regret it in the morning or whenever they wake

ooh harry has a crush on draco hell id peek at him in the shower too lol

poor Draco at least harry helped him though youd think his head of house would have tried to help him

ooh i like the start of this

awesome!

hey only just figured i haven't reviewd this chapter! _

write more please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please!

Hope to read more soon

Emma x

it took you that long to write that? sheesh. can't complain htough, takes other people longer._

That was so good! Please continue! Please, I'm begging here! I loved it! Loved it! You rock!

It's good.

I like the story, but Ron was a little OoC in that chapter. Also, it was a little hard to understand what happened the second time Harry saved Draco. Maybe you should have Draco slitting his wrists, or cutting himself. Maybe you should get a beta. I'm volunteering! Please reply! Please.

Ron was so cruel! at the moment he opend his mouth i wanted to kick him in the nuts . (i would be kicking in mid air cuz he's a character in a book but anyway) i love your story and i hope ull update soon :) good it doesnt end here!