ah! Im loving this story and youve left it hanging! please update :D

i always wanted to know what happened to kel?

please finish this

U need 2 update

o, when are you gonna update. i really likey...:-D! hope you continue!

I really like this story. Update soon. I want to know what happens next.

awesome story
please update soon
and please, please say the stalker isnt wyldon? thats just disturbing... oh well...
rem. updating is good

...that is a horrible ending TT_TT though you have not updated in like 4 years so I should just give up huh?

*whistles* holy **, i mean just- holy **

I don't exactly remember whether or not I reviewed already, but I want more of this thing. It's great! ^^

i am interested to see where you are going with this... there are some points in the story (including the other chapters) where it is difficult to follow the dialogue while still understanding who is speaking, particularly where kel, joren, dom, and neal argue.

wow.
I love this!
I hope you update soon!
It's amazing!
It's a great story and its wonderful.
=) I hope you update soon!

wow! i love this! its so Funny! ha Joren is such a little perv.! I absolutly can't wait to read the rest! The suspense!... it's ... killing me... *fall over dead*. Lying on my back about to die my last request is, "Please, wright and up-load the rest of the story. i don't know how much longer i can survive!

!please grant my dying wish!

(P.S. I'm not really dying but I really want to read the rest of this spectacular story! thnk-you! XD XP)

heyy, this is a pretty good story! i like it lots. review!

o this is kl! you gotta update! i eman you ahvnt updated since 2004!! and iw ant to know what happens!