Beautifully written, my dear.

That was so sad... :( Poor Ro...and I give the piece of coal back...

I really liked this. Ororo is my fave char. and this was a nice little tribute to her char. Very sweet.

This such a sad story I've read it like 5 times and I still love it.

Summer

The idea of Emma Frost with that particular duty was strange. Also, the story seemed a bit rushed, but I guess it fit with the way a child would tell it.

nicely written. to sad 4 me. irony is not my forte'. corse it is 3am. i am far from clever tonight, forgive me. z.

Beautiful! So sad! I loved it! Sara V.

That was so, whats the word I'm looking for...? Sad! Thats it!

Thats so sad it makes me want to cry

Very touching story. Thanks!

wow, that was pretty good. you don't really find good storm stories anymore. i think you should have mentioned a little more about her friendship with gambit, but it was still a great story. can't wait for more from ya!

Awesome! I loved it; really sad though. Can't wait to see more.

That was so sad! (Sniff)

A very touching story. I wanted to cry at the end.

Nikia

Oooohhh...that was so sad, but poinant. Keep writing, I'd like to see more of your work.-Arin