This really could have happened too.

This is so well written! I really enjoyed it! I think it has a certain magic to it, I'm glad it is this length though because I think that the shortness is effective and it is more powerful when it doesn't describe every little thing. I thought it was awesome!

I love this Neville.I love any character that's dark or independent! This was so short though,wish there was more detail so it would have been longer.

Wow scary...

Perfect!

OMGOSH! I cracked up with laughter when I finished it. Now my bro thinks I'm a waackjob.

THANK YOU for posting it.

You have made my day,

I loved it! Poor Neville.

FINALLY AH! SOMEONE figured out it would only be a matter of time till neville cracked yes great job and i bet totally original

um, randomly cool. not expecting the Avada Kedavra right there. still cool.

O.o whoa. Never saw that coming. Kinda dark, angsty feel there. Good writing it though. You could actually branch out with this and use it as a prologue, and then go back and talk about his last year at Hogwarts, and how nobody believed in him... but then, that would stop your other stories! Ah, the horror! ...good story. :D

Elle

maybe it's supposed to be creepy, but i can't keep myself from laughing!

Whoa... that was creepy.

LMAO!! Whoa, I don't think Neville would ever do that, but that's okay, this is still cool! Wonderous job!

You're right - it was creepy, short and to the point. And also very good. Well done.

I LOVE THIS FIC! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!