It took me until the end to figure it out too, and even then I had a moment where I wondered if they'd burned her wings off or something. But damn, that was a creeping last line.

Great job with this! :D

I had to read the story twice to understand that it's Justice Lords universe, and that Lords voted for lobotomizing Shayera. And only then John married her.
I feel uneasy just by thinking of this ceremony! You captured Lois' emotions very good!

Goodness...Talk about surprise ending. I think I get it now.

Damm.

Just...

DAMM.

Did NOT see that coming.

WOW that was a god story. Took me until the end to get that this was in the Justice Lords Universe

I think I'm going to be sick. I won't say you're brilliant or awesome because that would only cheapen it. Your work speaks for itself.

You sent chills down my spine.

This is a good thing. It took me until the very end to figure out *why* things seemed off (yes, I needed to read that they were the Lords to figure it out *slaps self*) and it took me even longer to figure out that Superman must have given Hawkgirl a heatvision lobotomy (the two burn marks), but...

*So* in character. Mid-transition from Justice League to Justice Lords, and just... Yeah. :)

O, nifty twist! Very well written; I liked it a great deal. Nicely done. :D

I'm a horrible person.
I missed the JL episode. THE one to end all episodes, that spawned a thousand fics.
So I don't raelly understand all the referances. But I loved this all the same. I ike different POV's like Lois's
And I like how the marks are important.
Cheers,
Saturn's Hikari

I just read this a second time, and I love it even more. Wonderful job!

I just found this story and it is outstanding! I have added you and this story to my favorites list. Great job!

Cool

Wow.
You did a good job with the suspense, I was trying to figure why the Justice League just didn't feel... right when you hit me with the ending. It's great to read a fic that remembers that the Justice Lords /are/ twisted reflections of the Justice League and what it stands for. I know I haven't said this before, but you're one of my favourite authors.

Heat vision lombotomy?

Just incredible. I'm in too much awe to say anything else. Just. . . wow.