FINISH IT!

Wow - you so did not do yourself justice with this little piece of wonder. Yes it was brilliant, but someone with writing talent as good as yours is, should be writing freaking novels! I would love it if you would write a longer piece if you ever have time, please email me to let me know when - if ever you have plans on doing so: lolita_diva@yahoo.co.uk.

Cheers. ;)

Hey!
Just saw this and figured I'd write a review. I think I might have told you how good this is the first time I read it, but I might have forgotten, so here's me telling you again how much I like this :)
Feel lucky, I'm usually too lazy to review!

Hey really good you gonna make another chappie ?I hope so ! It's realy good knida short though But you get {drum role } A Cookie

i like it, it was short but good.
short sweet and to the point
i like it alot
update soon

KRN

CUTENESS! i love the whole idea of fate and such, VERY spiffy stuff. so yay!

hey, it sounds really good, so if it isn't a one-shot, please update soon!