Very nice story, it makes me with their was some sort of continuation made.

i loved this more than i can express to you.

I luv this, i think it is my second favorite of all of your work! u write so well. I think it would be just awsome if u continues this one shot. i know u could make a really decent, original plotline, and it would be so awsome to read! i always check 2 see if u ever decided to add to this story. i know the final decision is in ur hands, but it has great possibilities to be a very popular fic. please continue it.

I like this little short. You did well in capturing Inuyahsa's character. Going to read more of your stuff now.

~QueenTatooine

that was good...please keep up the good work

Interesting and touching take on Inuyasha's childhood. The main story has an air of being incomplete, but not critically so.

Older Inuyasha is wierd, ne? I liked how you changed the character's relationships without changing the characters themselves too much (Inuyasha's speach was more refined. Was he trying to keep up an impression, or has Miroku begun to rub off on him?). It's interesting how you can spot a few morals out of fables like the ants and the grasshopper if you look closely...

it was cute but a bit confusing. you might want to reword it a little or make some sort of defining difference between the past and present. I liked (REALLY liked) the INuyasha/Kagome scene. it was well done, very tasteful.

This is a realy good story but it feels like a first chapter. I personaly would like to read more of this story. It's yours of course so you don't have to write any more if you don't want, but I incurege you to make this more than a one shot. As always, I love your work so please keep wrighting!

oh midoriko-sama. you are too good for words. what a lovely story. i love the kagome/inu interaction (but then who doesnt?) i cant wait for the next ch. of DYT... ive gotten a bunch of my friends into it too, and we'll all be voting!! i hope you did well on your exams!! goodluck--
Lavinia

It kinda was odd...I didn't really understand it. It kept jumping around to much, but good nonetheless...

no, you have to continue it! its far to good a story idea!!

Another great chapter Midoriko-Sama, it might not be a part of any story, but it makes a great begining! Or even a middle if you come up with some fore story.

I love it though! It's sweet and has the promise of action in the future. I hope you decide to come up with more (or your muse decides for you!)

Nice story. At some point it would be interesting to see it expanded - with the early part of Inuyasha's life that he is referring to and what happened after his escape.

Beautifully written, as always.