I'm so want kick the Directive!

You know lady? That is Vegeta..

I loved this story _

hmm,. well, you finished that in a bit of a hurry, didn't you? grr,,. I think tht' a shame.

bit of a strange ending sentence, but other then that it's great.

blinks...I LOVED IT! write a squeal! please!

set and bra...they seem alot alike, hummmmmmmm ah well

gota read the next chapter! love'n this story!

set...a sayain, no,no,no,no,nooo...i don't like the sound of that...love'n the story

2 vegetas o.O?

i'm like'n it!

well, like I was about to say when I was gratiouslessly kicked off the comp. I really like. I'll just continue on to chap 3, if I may. and I think I may :))

wow! that was really good! i mean, i wasn't at all expecting that. that was really kewl...later

That was very good! I knew it was Bra the entire time.

wow that was a cliffhanger! Please write more!

KEEP WRITTING! I'M LIKEING THIS STORY...ALOT, I WANT TO KNOW WHO AND GIRL IS! and where are trunks and vegeta anyways?

I like. you really woke up my curiosity there. I'd like to see more.

but there seems to be some bugg in you URL to this page,.. very hard to open -had to go to you prof and even then, I got the whole piece underlined.