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Reviews For: A Hero

StarTraveler 2006-09-06 ch 1,	abusegreat fic. I loved the character of Robert the BRuce.
Got Scots 2006-06-14 ch 1,	abuseThis is really beautiful. You're a really good writer and you really captured Robert's character. Please write more Braveheart stories!
Sea Fire 2006-03-27 ch 1,	abuseWOW!
Monise 2005-09-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. Great. Loved the movie. Really enjoyed this little ficlet. Nice work.
GGADDICT22 2005-08-09 ch 1,	abuseYour story actually made me cry. Or at least, to the bite your lip choke back tears thing. It was an amazing movie. And a amazing piece or writing I'm looking forward to reading more! I loved the Phrase "The people follow him willingly They do not fight because a lord ordered them to do so. They fight becasue they want to Freedom has spoken to their heats a d has given them hope. That is what they fight for" Your writing definetily did justice to such an incredible movie hich is hard to do!
Knux Rox 2005-06-29 ch 1,	abuseDude...that was by far the best piece of literature I have ever read. You really have a way with words. Anyway, I liked Robert the Bruce, but hated how his life ran on his fathers decisions. If I were him, I would have killed Longshanks while he was sitting on his horse on the battlefield; even if it would have gotten me killed. I really liked this.
Jenny 2005-03-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like very much your story!! I love BRAVEHEART and I wrote also a fanfiction about Robert Bruce, after the death of Wallace (but is written in italian because I'm italian!)
Kaylee 2005-03-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm really impressed by this story. I myself am a huge fan of the movie Braveheart so I just thought I'd see what's here and this one is great! I think you protrayed Robert the Bruce very well from what I've heard about him and I've studied him a lot because way back on the female side of my family he was my ancestor (but because it's on the female side the royal blood was washed out). Nice job!
DL and IY-luvr 2005-02-26 ch 1,	abuseVery touching. It had lots of imagery: "Their blood stains my hands for all of eternity, for I may just as well have killed them with my own sword." Excellent, I loved it. Everytime I watch Brave heart it fills me with such inspiration, and your story did the same. Very, very good job. On another note: you went to the Tower of London? That's amazing, I've always wanted to go, ever since I learned about it. My family is picking a place to go on vacation and my parents said lets go to teh bahamas again and I said "oh I know! Lets go to teh Tower of London!!". Wes I know... I'm a freak, but history is just so important becasue it built the cultures we have today and I want to experience that first hand. Sadly to say, my parents don't want to go anywhere without nice sandy beaches and bright, blue clear waters so we won't be traveling there anytime soon. I hope you had fun and learned a lot. Keep writing because I can see that by given the inspiration you can write beautifully.
J 2005-02-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseA great story although i can't help but point out his name was Robert the Bruce not Robert Debruce. apart from that a fantastic piece
Valiowk 2005-01-13 ch 1,	abuseIt's really reminiscent of Robert DeBruce. I liked the paragraph which said, "The people follow him willingly. They do not fight because a lord has ordered them to do so. They fight because they want to. Freedom has spoken to their hearts and given them hope." This is the kind of leader whom one might meet once in a lifetime and never forget...this kind of leader who leaves an eternal legacy...this kind of leader for whom Robert DeBruce would spend the rest of his life working to achieve his final dreams.
Callisto Callispi 2004-08-25 ch 1,	abuseTower of London? That is rather strange. Lol. But...your story was very good. You've captured Robert DeBruce perfectly. And angst. I love all of this angst. ;) Guilt is such a powerful emotion to toy with, is it not? Lol. Excellent work. -C. Callispi
Marys 2004-06-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh, this is perfect, just perfect. It sums up everything flawlessly. Please write more. You're a skilled writer and I would like to see more of your work.

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