Wonderful to be able to see the Captain and Jonathan together like this. The best thing, however, was the little reminiscence of a hung-over Mister Gregg. Very well written. Thanks, Beth Palladino

Jonathan going out and getting drunk. Come on now.

Hey, Pardner! :-)

Thanks so much for the kind words and for the great time I had collaborating with you. You set up the action beautifully and made it really easy for me to get into my part of it. And the whole scene in the car with Jonathan is simply priceless -- makes me laugh everytime :-) Thanks again for pairing up with me on this one -- I had a blast!

Chantal

This one was a little better. It was funny at least. And Jonathan really got what for.

Great story Chantal! I love what you wrote about Daniel going through the same situation, and how kind but firm Captain Marsden was to him, and how he passed that firm, but kind approach along to Jonathan. One hopes that Jonathan will do the same when it's HIS turn!

I had a lot of fun collaberating with you, and I would love to do it again sometime!

Cheers, and job well done!

Mary

Very enjoyable story. I went through a similar situation with my sister. I wish somebody had handled it the way the Captain did.
Great story, loved it as always.

Great story ladies. Thanks for the wonderful read. Could just see Jonathan in his drunken condition while reading the story. Poor lad waking up with a tomcat.
Anne