Good, but would be curious to see what happened prior to the lover's suicide.

I support you!
I have also been thinking the 'forbidden' thoughts of Harry and Severus being father and son but also lovers.
I mean, I like SSHP and I like Severitus.
Why not both? Angsty, yes, but I love angst.

No flames from me! That was beautiful and heartbreaking.

you're a wonderful writer.
as much as this story is painful, it's good too. does that make sense?

i'd love it if this went beyond a snippet, but if you don't want to, i understand that.

if i wasn't listening to happy emo music, I would have cried D:

that was beautiful in a twisted kind of way and I enjoyed it.

'A snippet from a story I will likely never write.' why not? Who cares about the flames (if any!), it sounds like an interesting story!

wow!
This is just wow!
I dont really know what to say!
You got me off guard here!
This is just increable!
I mean sad and great at the same time!

I don't know why anyone would flame you, well I do but I wouldn't...er never mind

Anyways I really liked this small bit of work you did, and I would love to see this turned into a fic one day. It'd be nice :) Thanks for writing it

I enjoyed this story and I know you said you would most likely never write the full story I would like you to reconsider. If you are completely against this idea I would like to offer to write it for you as I have after only reading it a few moments ago have an idea for the story. If you are agreeable to this proposition, please, email me at with your reply.

Beautifully written, and while the incest is a quick of mine, I absolutely love snarry. You have captured the moment perfectly. Your writting is such that I can see them in my mind, together, forever. Perfect.
Nixi

Severitus Snarry! *gasps*

I can't stand unnecessary angst and the glamorization of suicide. Those are the only things I didn't like here.

Did you post it somewhere else? [Because FFNET sucks. Allways deleting stuff]. I liked it, but how can they look relaxed when they've cut their wrist open?

o man!

you wrote this type of category really well. I was kind of freaked out when I read the summary, but it was good.

Romeo and Juliet... only with incest ^^

I love it. Severitus incest is so rare! So this is all the more precious. Though, *sniffle* it's sad that they kill themselves.

great is there a story with any background to the rest of this.

hecatedemort{at}

Squicky, Poignant and well-written.