Poor draco.

This is really good so far; it seems like it could actually happen the way you write it. I'm sorry that there doesn't seem to be much chance of your continuing it.

This is a really good fic. Good solid plot, excellent characterisation, nice writing style. The pace at which you're taking the development of the relationship is also realy good. My only complaint is that it's been months since you updated and it doesn't look like there'll be more - which is a real shame because this is really good.

Ooh, i like so far. Very interesting. I like Draco's confusion and that he has his little faults and they way you write it. It's a really good start, I'm looking forward to more.
aeriel ravenna

Please update soon. It's alluring.

so so so unbelievably good...omg..i can't wait till you update! i love draco's voice...i've never read a story where he had this kind of personality.

wow. oh wow. i just love how you write. update soon!

And you ended it perfectly, but can't there be more?

The flirtation... The romance.. The passion... OH wait, this is an 'innocent' story... Stil really good!

Aww... YOu write really well...

I really like this story, it's written really nicely...

I remember reading this story on another ppenname, and I remember how I much I loved it... Keep up the good writing!

Wow that was intence! I love it though. Keep it up, dont change a thing. Cheers,
Emma

What does he want?! I so wanna know! Update soon and keep writing!

-Rachelle (that's my name in french class)-

Cool