Ah, I didn't know you were into shakespeare! How cool. Personally, Hamlet is my favorite play!(Seeing as it's the longest of the 30 or so plays he wrote.)

Yes, I think you got that Shakespearian tone in there. You did a good job in capturing Hamlet's frustration with Ophelia and all women in general. However, instead of putting a comma at the end of every line, try putting some periods to break it up, it would make more sense that way.

Kick ass. The Shakespeare-talk is really cool.

This was short and sweet, I loved it. I absolutely adore Hamlet, and you've captured his feelings for Ophelia magnificently. Well done.

A wonderful insight on Hamlet-it could be a companion piece to my own story on Ophelia! Very good job; you've grasped the language beautifully-short and sweet.

the flaming angel

*Standing ovation* Excellent. I've always ADORED the play, "Hamlet" and you've certainly captured the prince's, currently (and perhaps his feelings throughout the rest of the play towards women) penitent stance toward Ophelia-while also managing a very beautifully tragic language. You've definitely captured-at least-MOST of the complex Shakespearean dialect, and I'm surprised you haven't gotten a review for this so far. Beautiful... oh, and did I mention I have a COLOSSAL infatuation with Hamlet? Heh. _0 OPHELIA GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED!

Love,

Michelle