:'( d'aw poor Kiba (and Shino too!)
I'm happy for Ino and Shikamaru though,

Great writing process! The two stories were easy to follow and I love how you incorporated both stories to interact with each other! The actions, words, and thoughts were very well written and were fluid.
:)

*Little* Sorry, I`ve forgotten the name in English^_^

I`ve read "Small Green Leaf" but in Russian(hope,you know that it had been translated). I think it is the best fanfic I have ever read.And most of Russians, who read fans, are agree with me. And then I found THIS. I haven`t read the last chapter yet, but I really like the storry and the way you`re writing. Can you let me translate it in russian, please?

This was really well written and I enjoyed it immensely. I read it for the Shika/Ino, but I was surprised how much I liked the Kiba and Hinata part as well. I would love to see you continue to write.

Aw...the ending was cute...even though I was hoping for a Kiba/Hinata union...they're really cute together...nonetheless it was very well written!! Great job!

Super cute. I died a little of the cute, but it was a good death. :-)

Very well-written teenage characters doing very teenage things. Totally in character.

Wow. I loved it beyond loving it. I actually started crying with Kiba and Hinata at the end. And I now officially have saved the best quote in this fanfic: "Because unfortunately, not everything could be solved with violence. Which sucked, because Kiba wasn't any good at reason or emotion." *Cue royal trumpets and party music and stuff*

WHAT!! kiba and hinata didn't end up together... thats soo sad and he confessed so adorabley :[

but it was a really good story none the less
:]

well done

yay

The ending were very realistic, I loved how you did it. This is exactly what could happen in the anime. You put thier points of view very nicely too. I didn't really see any grammar problems. So it was a very cool. Over all, it was a entertaining story.

WHAT?! They was suppose to go out with each other not be friends. O well, i love it anyway and wht ever happened to Kiba kicking Shikamaru's butt for using his justu on him?

I can't believe Shikamaru did that to Ino.0.o And who is trying to marry my Shino- kun, Shino mineminemine i mean just look at my nameT-T

o.o...

You're an amazing story-weaver! I loved every second of it!

If I could favourite you multiple times, I would :)

Thank you for writing this~

-Iris.D

LOL, Everyone confuse ShikamaruXDXD Neji sounds just like his real self

XDXD I didn't even know or thought about it being Kiba stuck in Shikamaru's justuXDXD...poor kiba, it will be all right, don't cryT-T