Wow. United by how pathetic they are. I shudder...yet am intrigued. I was rewatching the only season I'll admit exists when I realized Seth and Marissa had far more in common with one another than either have with their 'preferred' partners. Pity.

This is really quite disturbing because they're both obviously wishing the other was Ryan, if only for completely different reasons. I'm trying to find a word to describe it and I can't.

Good on you.

Amazing piece of work! (Pieces, actually... oh well. :p)

Great story I really loved the Seth & Marissa relationship throughout the story from just being there for each other to having sex and then here finally realising that they have real feelings for each other.
Only wished you could have ended it with S&M together instead of Seth walking back to Summer and leaving it open considering the facts that Seth's relationship with Summer is nothing like it used to be as well as the fact that Marissa stated that she could no longer be with Ryan.

Awesome work! I hope you write more Seth & Marissa stories in the future!

Simon (aka Simoman)

i only just read this but i think it is great! :)

There's so few Seth/Marissa's that I appreciate the attempt. With that said, I thought it was wonderful. I felt that you got the characters and the interactions just right.

ah they are stupid

i love your giving more to the story

thats hot

great chapter

Wow.. amazing story. I love Seth/Marissa together.. R/M and S/S is just very dramatic, Seth/Marissa I think would bring to each other excactly what the other needs.. Reminds me some of Pacey/Joey from Dawson's Creek. But anyway, I really love this story. Your writing skills are magnificent and I really hope you will write more! Once again, amazing story!!

I really like your story. But I wish that you had ended with Seth and Marissa being together. Have you written anymore fanfics to do with Marissa and Seth?

I just read it all, and I loved it! I know this was written a long time ago, so I'm not going to beg for a sequel. :( Good job, though! It's easily one of my favorites! ;)

Oh my god this was so sad! I did so love this story, very angsty and kinda depressing in the end, but great nonethless! Very beautiful

The pairing is unusual but you've written it so well, it seems very believable. And I loved it! I liked the open-ended ending too. The Julie/Jimmy thing was a bit of a shocker but really effective. Glad you extended your intial one-shot.

good story. You really put out onto this. now Seth and Marissa are stuck. They have to go back to their lives that it once was and have to forget what happened between them. Reminds me of a movie (Eternal Sunshine of a spotless mind)

You wouldn't be intrested in doing a sequel would you?