Please continue this! Omg, I love it...But do you want money? I can give money.. Just bring Laura back! Lol I'm kidding, do what ever your little writing heart do what ever pleases it =)

the story is great,but did you half to make it so sad in ch. 10? anyway i give your story so far 4 and a half stars out if 5! keep writing! the only complaint is that it is a little to emotional.

Great job i love it

Great story. I know you're struggling through college (so am I) but you've created a wonderful story. I only saw the movie a few days ago and already I'm hooked. I read a couple of DAT fics here and yours is the first that really got me.

Your writing is a bit rushed sometimes, though. I noticed you tend to use 'because' a lot throughout your chapters, and that's a word that really does weaken a story (at least, in my opinion) because it's an analytical word. It kind of makes my brain go in analytical mode whenever I see it, lol.

Oh, yeah, and I noticed a couple of typos (nackered should be spelled knackered) but that's not too problematic... The strong plot makes up for those little glitches.

Overall, beautiful job, keep it up, and I'll be checking this fic again ;D Take care!

Good first chapter so far, keep up the good work.

I can't stand cliffies. They drive me mad, but then again, they always keep me coming back. First of all, I would like to thank you for reviewing my fanfic and I'm sorry if it feels I used your ideas, I really didn't know that they were so similar until you reviewed. I have had this idea in my head for so long. Once again, sorry that they were so similar. I'm re-doing the whole first three chapters.

Anyway, on to reviewing this chapter, I LOVE IT!!
That is pretty much all I can say now, as I am speachless. One last thing, I can't wait until chapter 11.

Hahaa, I've just read my review and made myself look a fool. I meant Janet and Jason. But I'm ill, so I'll put it down to that.

Great job with this fic. Although that's quite an angsty end to the chapter. I can't help but wonder how and if things will resolve themselves. I love the way you portray Mary and her role in Sam and Laura's lives. Keep up the good work and update soon! I hate cliffies. And to me, unresolved long-term separation of the star couple is definitely a cliffie.

Wow, you don't have to thank us for reveiwing your story. If you really want to thank us, just keeping writing this brillant pice of work.

Cheers!

I just wanted to let you know of a gross error in your story. I've lived near Saudi Arabia (the island of Bahrain) in summer when it can reach 140F. It's totally survivable--everyone wears short sleeve tshirts and pants or jeans. You may want to change that temp to something more like 170 or 180F.

again, you continue to amaze me with this story, keep it up :)

Aww no! You did not just get me totally hyper at Janet and Jack (go them! Go them!) and then deflate me with Sam and Laura! Ah, you're the writer. You have a better sense of where everything is going, so I'll just go with it. But, yay, look, Janet and Jack!

i love this story, i can't wait for you to post chapter 10. I am writing my own sequel to the movie as well. If you wanted to look at it, look me up, i am dragonmaster627.

Amazing, this story is so interesting.
Please continue.
(don't make it to confusing now)

Such concise writing and good description. I think this is a very realistic take on the story. I would love it if you would provide us with a character list becuase I am having trouble remembering who everyone is, especially the minor persons. Update soon.