Pretty decent, and I liked how the POV was from a person not in the anime. Nice work!

Really good actually, I liked your take on the game, and hope i see some more soon, keep it up

Wow! Clever fic idea! V Original _ _

It was very bitter sweet, if you know what I mean. But I enjoyed it. I always like Sabrina in fics. She's awesome.

The ending left me cool. . . just sitting here thinking. . .

I liked it!

Maia

Ha! This was sad, but also sweet at the same time! Could you please make some more Ash/Sabrina fanfics? Just like the way there were in here, making out and all! Please? Keep it up!

Oh my god! I was planning on writing a fic centering on the Karate King but from the POV of his Hitmonchan! I'm really happy (if not surprised) to have found this fic. It gives more insight to the poor guy. Personally, I would havw written it out with scenes rather than the whole thing reminiscing. I like the sad ending too (I had also planned a sad ending with mine). I like you.

Very interesting. Keep up the great work.

I like Sabrina reguardless of the situation. This story really does fit into the game. Cool one-shot is all i'm saying

I read this on your homepage and it's really good!

Well, I liked it. It was very angsty. Poor guy.