very kawaii! o_o I luv this! Goku seems soo sweet and Sanzo too!

This is very sweet. I know you said it wasn't shounen-ai, but I can't help but see it in their relationship. This was very well written, and they were all in perfect character. I can't wait to see more from you.

Nice and calm. Interesting approach to the story, not using very many quotes to tell what they were saying. It adds to the happy summer feel. The scene of Goku jumping around and Sanzo sitting back watching is really cute.

Sweet and cute. (Is that why it's called Sugar?) Probably the first 393 I've ever read... wait, no, the second I think... ;) Somehow I really like the Sanzo in your story... Cheers