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| q.thews 2007-10-06 ch 3,  | abuseA beautiful not little, i prefer to call it "compact" story. I really prefer ST:ENT fanfiction to ST:ENT tv series :-) Ciao! |
| q.thews 2007-10-06 ch 2, | abuseVery nice, good characterization in so few words. Ciao! |
| q.thews 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseWell written but i have an objection (well they are two but fall in the same category). T'Pol should know (at least something) about both Shakespeare than the nature (if not the religious one the holiday one) of Christmas. She wasn't dropped unprepared on Earth, probably she studied human culture for some time before joining the embassy (i don't remember if something about it was mentioned in some episodes but it seem the logical thing :-) ). Ciao! |
| Azeel Rose 2004-12-31 ch 3, | abuseAh! (Joyful noise) That was so good! It was so sweet. I usually don't like Trip/ T'pol shippage, but this completely turned my head. I can tell you are a seasoned writer. I can't believe the way you get into the heads of the characters. So good. You are going on my favorite author list. Thanks! |
| Angel15116 2004-11-10 ch 3, | abuseThat was sweet. I kinda liked it. |
| Elizabeth Annette 2004-08-11 ch 3, | abuseAfter season 4 comes, are you going to add a christmas? I loved this story, it really fit in with the show. |
| Luna 2004-08-04 ch 3, anon. | abuseWOW! I loved that! ^_^ It's really well written and very expressive! ^_^ -Luna |
| Drakcir 2004-06-23 ch 3, | abuseThis was really good!! A little late for Christmas perhaps, but still enjoyed. |
| Sash29 2004-06-22 ch 3, | abuseLovely story, and you've handled Archer's POV very nicely. I like the way you've portrayed his reaction -- no confrontation or emotional outburst, just stunned acceptance and the realization of far apart he's grown from his friends. Thanks again for sharing this! |
| Phaser Lady 2004-06-21 ch 3, | abuseI'm glad you didn't make this chapter an Archer Angst Fest. The tone stayed light enough to enjoy the Trip/T'Pol interaction. I liked Archer's exclamations: "And more teasing? What the hell is this?" and "And, oh my God! She just reached up and kissed him on the cheek before walking out of the mess hall."- LOL! I took the last paragraph in a lighthearted way, as I'm not in Archer-Angst mode tonight. Nicely done, overall. Perhaps you'd consider doing another holiday? They ought to have fun with Valentines Day... Thank you for sharing this with us! |
| JennaTripped 2004-06-21 ch 3, | abuseI love it. I thought Archer's POV was very nice. Not icky and jealous, but not thrilled to death either. I think that fits him. Dare I hope for a fourth Christmas>=? |
| Phaser Lady 2004-06-19 ch 2, | abuseAww! Cute. More soon, I hope! |
| plumtuckered 2004-06-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseBravo! This chapter was adorable! I hope you're planning on more! Thank you! |
| Sash29 2004-06-19 ch 2, | abuseI enjoyed this chapter even more than the first one! Thanks for sharing! |
| jazri 2004-06-19 ch 2, anon. | abusei look forward to the next chapter/christmas, update soon |