This is such a heartbreaking story, but very well written

Brilliantly chilling story

good story i think the POV was interesting

Close, but not the bomb.

Still, it's good. While I didn't exactly feel angsty, it all felt very... realistic. Natural. Like something that could actually happen in the first season.

Wow, this was very chilling. I still fill the shivers. Very well written indeed. It's so sad, but it's also life. The reflections and descriptions were wonderful. I really enjoyed it.

Poor old Harper :-(. I do like a good Harper angst story though, and this is one.

wow, i always wished that someone would write a story on that line because i always wanted them to say more on that subject. great job.

Very good. They never really went into detail about his life on earth on TV. That's a shame.

Very short, but powerful. Nice job with the Harper angst. ;D

Well written, good work.

Wow, very good story. I really liked it! Good job!

Not bad, (very sad of course) I was hoping someone would attempt to go into detail about what Harper said. Dunno if he'd of shown Trance his scars (It's weird that they haven't shown/told us anything like that on the show) But still very good story. -Luna

wow, that was well written and pretty moving too. Liked the Harper/Trane interaction, very natural. great fic.