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| heartfallen 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is such a heartbreaking story, but very well written |
| lemu 2006-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseBrilliantly chilling story |
| Sabith 2006-03-10 ch 1, | abusegood story i think the POV was interesting |
| Hiryu Kaga 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseClose, but not the bomb. Still, it's good. While I didn't exactly feel angsty, it all felt very... realistic. Natural. Like something that could actually happen in the first season. |
| HarpersTrinket 2004-07-28 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was very chilling. I still fill the shivers. Very well written indeed. It's so sad, but it's also life. The reflections and descriptions were wonderful. I really enjoyed it. |
| Laura-trekkie 2004-06-28 ch 1, | abusePoor old Harper :-(. I do like a good Harper angst story though, and this is one. |
| roper 2004-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, i always wished that someone would write a story on that line because i always wanted them to say more on that subject. great job. |
| Carol J 2004-06-26 ch 1, | abuseVery good. They never really went into detail about his life on earth on TV. That's a shame. |
| gotmilk 2004-06-24 ch 1, | abuseVery short, but powerful. Nice job with the Harper angst. ;D |
| Wired Witch 2004-06-20 ch 1, | abuseWell written, good work. |
| Callie-Cat 2004-06-18 ch 1, | abuseWow, very good story. I really liked it! Good job! |
| Luna Sealeaf 2004-06-18 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, (very sad of course) I was hoping someone would attempt to go into detail about what Harper said. Dunno if he'd of shown Trance his scars (It's weird that they haven't shown/told us anything like that on the show) But still very good story. -Luna |
| PhoniexChild 2004-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, that was well written and pretty moving too. Liked the Harper/Trane interaction, very natural. great fic. |