nice story... really liked it... good job... great work...

hahahaha nice... though i still hate that rex guy and hope he didnt get anyone...

KAWAII!
Now that the story is over, MURDER THE ELDERS!
*the gang rooting for SxS, attacks the elders and they all die*

this was good

oh...im guessing i should have read the 2 chap then mentioning the kinoyoto thing... um... very nice story? =D

uum... you do relize that you put miss kinoyoto in... right? nice story by the way...

Umm...so your story well...isn't that great really. The English is horrible. Your tenses are done horribly. And the story itself was...well to rushed and un-planned. You need to work on your English and writing skills. When writing a story such as this you use the past tense most the of the time. And stick to one tense unless you state the change. Take an English Course. Read other stories you'll get what I mean. Also you forgot a lot of words here and there. Sentences didn't make sense,w ords were misplaced. Their are tons of errors in this story you should fix them one day. But I do commend you on actually finishing the story. Good Job.

Hey

This has been a really good story keep up the good work!

Kimmy

i love it

man, couldn't she just fly above the maze?
you can use magic right?? silly...

ah kawaii!! i loved it! such a wonderful story!

i rerly rely rely rely luv it...
its so kawai...
its so romantic...

That was such a cute story!

this story was great. i look forward to readin more stories from you. keep up the great work. thanks...byez.

really good.