This one isn't half bad. You have an occasional short chapter, but I can't think of much else. Keep it up!

Hi Zipis! Since ffnet probably won't let me review the same chapter twice this one isn't signed in. Well let's see what should I say to motivate you to write? How about "OMG you must write, you must!" and "If you don't write I'll hunt you down and steal your cookies!" and also "I'm taking your plushies and holding them hostage until you update!" I guess that just about covers it, have a nice day. :D (Mwahahaha! You thought I wouldn't send you a review like this?) Though I'm not sure if this goes with definition of "pushy" review and I promised a pushy review and Mikari wouldn't break a promise so... *shoves into computer* that should take care of the pushy part. Ok, I'm leaving now, bye-bye!

This is really well written - description, dialogue, characterisation, everything. *is in awe* I also liked the way you explained their previous intimate encounter to the reader - by having them reminiscing, I mean, not using a flashback. That was well done, as was the rest of the story.

...Update as soon as you can!

Ho Noes! Who kidnapped Lucca? o.O Update soon!

Sweet. This story rules. Please update ASAP! Here's an idea: Have Lucca's pregnancy somehow affect future techniques of delivery or something like that. More timestream manipulation would rule. This person who grabs Lucca at the end of this chapter; my money goes on either a certain persistent amphibious knight, or a really ** off Magus. MUST...KNOW...REST...OF...STORY...

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Okay, I know I'm only two of seven chapters in, but I absolutely MUST comment on how hilariously funny this is. I know the genre says "Romance/Drama", but humor is definitely a third. I saw "LuMa" in the summary, and I thought "Lucca/Marle?" Then I realized while reading this chapter, "No way! Lucca/MAGUS?!" I love this story, and will read it through to the end. Really. Please expect a review from me for Chapter Seven. Magus was one of my favorite characters in the game. This is just too funny to pass up.

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Damn, Im loving this fic, especily since there was one more chapter than last time I checked.

More updates soonish ?

I love your story! That impostor can't do justice! I'm going to report him (as are a lot of people, I'm sure)

Yay, this is awesome! Hopefully they take down that impostor.

lol this is REALLY good. i so hope that it's either magnus or Glenn that has her. either would be perfect. lol Poor Luca. you almost fell bad for her. i have this picture of Chrono and merle finding out and then coming to tell Glenn and all of them showing up to kill poor Magnus

*deep intake of breath* MORE! ...Please? Pwetty pwease?

I seem to have missed the fake chapter seven, but I'm just glad that I got another chapter. And though you left us with a cliffhanger, I think we all already know who grabbed her. Unless we're slower than notoriousreviewer, which is an incredible feat.

I know I took forever reviewing the new chapter (only about a month late...) but you still haven't written another one...*sniff* You know, I should start trying harder to get some fanfic writing done, and so I just might get a LuMa up before this thing's next chapter! But don't rush inspiration, eh? But it would never be as good as this...

Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease update! Don't worry, I'll never abandon you as long as you promise you'll never abandon this. I just wanna read more, darnit!

I just wanted to say that this story really is awesome--Lucca and Magus make an interesting combination, and you seem to have a really good handle on their personalities.

Keep up the l33tness!

Turned out to be a great story, I don't believe you havent' updated in like 2 years!! The last chapter gave me quite a chuckle as images of frog acting as a midwife passed through my head.

Your story has progressed well with a good story line. It does however make Magus's behaviour in the previous chapter quiestionable.

Interesting first chapter... if a bit boreing :P Certainly makes the ending wake you up and want to read on though.