 panaltantic 2004-06-20 . chapter 1 che. it won't let me login today... (but why should today be special... stoopid ffn)
anyway... a very cute fic, nice to see maiko worked into a fic, shes one of the more undesused characters i feel. did think you could work in a bit more connection with what we do know about the characters, cos its just sort of a moment without going anywhere (which is okay i guess... ah... i'm fussy today :P)
i did really enjoy it however!! do you plan to write more of the same? (i mean as new chapters under the same title?) |