That was a cool song I really liked it. :)

:D good. You are right, that could be a song. Just put it to music.

...weird...

Good job, being that it was I who wrote this. I AM ROCKNKITTEN. I just changed computer hook-ups and now I am with comcast and not AOL, so I can't even reply to all of you nice reviewers out there. I am sorry I can't write any more stories as Rocknkitten. I am now Marshall Bond.

Great poem, I could really sense a tune to that!

Very good! What you have is great but you must, no NEED! to continue. It just seems unfinished to me. good job!

awesome!

it was a very touchy poem.*sob*

bye *sniffle,sniffle*

oh...i thought that was good! well actually could use a little work but good.