Wonderfully written! Kikyou's speech is very moving! This would make a great short story, you should consider extending it.

Wow, I loved this view of Inuyasha and Kikyou :) The idea that he runs to Kikyou out of loneliness and a sense of belonging really, I mean REALLY made sense ^_^

The language used in this was really beautiful, too. I loved the line about the "flowers drinking in the moonlight," or something like that.

The only thing I would probably change would be adding the Author's Note in the middle of the story - it kind of takes away from the experience a little. Other than that, I don't see any problems at all :)

This is darn good, especially for only being typed up in an hour! Great fic!

~Chrystaline