A great story. Very funny.

Very,very funny. I would like you to use paragraphs next time.

Very Original. It sounds completely like something they would put on the sight. Bubs getting stuff stolen from him, Marzipan revolting because an inanimate object told her so, it's very good.

Homestar's hat Hydraulics Comedic Gold. It's a proven formula. Anyways, very nice work. Not only true to character, but true to the story stylings of the Chapps. Great (Insert Coach Z-like pronounciation of "Job" here).

Great story. It was very funny and you stayed true to the source material. I hope to see more writing from you in the future!

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This was a great story, everything was well-described and very amusing. Great job!