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| Tutsuya 2008-03-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseaw i love that one it's going on my favorites! |
| sunny-rain 2006-09-29 ch 2, | abusehm...I absolutely loved the first chapter. I actually laughed out loud at this part: "In Naruto’s haste to fix the damage, he tripped over the chair and flailed, whacking Sasuke in the arm which caused the boy to lose his grip on his fork, which nearly impaled Mrs. Haruna like one of his kunai would." XD such a funny image!! anyways, great description, mood and very well-written... very enjoyable to read. but, for the 2nd chapter...well..."o.0" it was unexpected ...sort of strange...and, well, I just can't picture Naruto turning into a girl. Yea..sorry, the idea just rubbed me the wrong way...not trying to offend you, but I just couldn't grasp the idea on the 2nd chapter... All in all though, I thoroughly enjoyed the 1st chapter, it would've been fine to just end it there... it was very sweet, and the flow of the story was very smooth. Happy writing, thanky!~ |
| danii-chan 2006-02-04 ch 2, | abuseAW! It's adorable! I love it soo much! It's soo cute! |
| itoshii-youkai 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abusegr...i finished reading ur story and i reviewed for chap. 2..but i gave u site that goes along with my comment and it didnt come out...gr... here it is u might like it... h t t p : / / w w w . fan fiction . net /s / 2 2 7 6 2 2 7 /1 / ~squeals away~ |
| itoshii-youkai 2005-07-06 ch 2, | abuseActually the Uchiha Clan is a matrilineal clan...which means that the Sharingan can only be passed on by the mother...so Sasuke...heheehehe lol...j/k ~squeals away~ u might like it... |
| Kiwee 2005-06-25 ch 2, | abuseThat was really cute...but really, must Naruto be a girl permanently? I mean, isn't there a techinique that he could have used? *sigh* Poor Naru...;.; |
| Ansuke 2005-01-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseOMG that was so cute! I love it. it was really sad in the beginning but it was so cute in the end! i love it. |
| Hatsumi Narita 2004-12-13 ch 2, | abuseCute! I guess now Naruto can never be seme,heh. Great story |
| hana-chan666 2004-12-13 ch 2, | abusehahahahaha! kawaï , too funny ! great job !! hana_chan6 |
| Too lazy to log in 2004-07-03 ch 2, anon. | abuse*claps madly* LOVE IT HONEY! *snaps fingers repeatedly* !KEEP IT UP! THIS IS GREAT! AND THIS IS STRANGE! BUT IT'S STILL GREAT! ^.~ |
| Too lazy to log in 2004-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseooh..this is nice. Y'know, you could've just ended it here, and it would still be very sweet! But, I have to read the next chapter! But good work anyway! |
| Kawaii Ali 2004-06-29 ch 2, | abuseThat was perfect! XD I ansolutely love this story! The ending was great! |
| kei 2004-06-24 ch 2, anon. | abusewhoa...weird. but cool. creative too! nice job, and i found it a bit humorous that the kyubi is female. |
| Kyuubi-kun 2004-06-23 ch 2, | abuseI find this so kawaii... I don't know why, its just great. I'm surprised that Sasuke didn't know about the Oiroke no Jutsu... or the Harem no Jutsu... I mean, that was one of Naruto's favorite techniques!heehee... I really liked this Kyuubi-chan |
| Ambience 2004-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe Japanese don't use forks or spoons. They use chopsticks. And chewing with your mouth closed is a western manners thing; most asian countries don't care about it overly much. Your story is good though Naruto is kinda OOC. |