Rather poetic, methinks!
Good!

This is exactly how I exepcted Athrun and Lacus to first meet. Is this a one-shot? Aww, it doesn't matter. It's still sweeter than sugar yet doesn't make me gag like sugar. Yes, I'm a real LacusXAthrun fan in a world of AthrunXCagalli fans, ya know.

I love this fic, and I was thinking that maybe you could do in Athrun's prospective because the first chapter was in Lacus's I really hope you write another chapter and I'm glad you're an Athrun and Lacus fan, there are too few of us. Athrun and Lacus Forever!

AxL forever!

Is this right before her very first meeting with Athrun, when they were 14? Being a strong supporter of the couple, I found it a bit unsatisfying that her reflection 'smiles sadly back,' but I suppose that's understandable since this is an arranged political marriage. Surely her reflection will smile happily ever after when she thinks of him, especially seeing how very well they get along before the start of the series. XP

Just read the summary again and realised she's probably smiling sadly because of the whole Coordinator-is-perfect mindset a lot of the people have at that time. Not to worry. When she grows older, she'll learn the inevitable path for Coordinators as her father does.

Hello! Very nice story.Is this one-shot or are you going to continue it? I hope you do.(my old user name was lady dragon,by the way.)

I like the irony in this. I absolutely think this is a wonderful piece of work, and I guess every author wants to get constructive critism on their work instead of a praise from reviewers; but there is nothing to critise about. So I give you kudos to be able to write about the proclaimed "angelic princess" of the series, in a way we've all thought about, but had not expressed in a way that we all entirely understood. Though in my opinion, Lacus is not always merry and airheaded with the mind of a 12-year-old as she presents herself. But I guess that's always left for the fans to pick up and play with.

All in all, good story. I'll look forward to your future works.

'Yes, Lacus Clyne was born to be gentle and demure, and above all, unquestioning.'

this line was the one that sticked out over the others for me. great choice of words there. anyways, very good job with this fic here. i especially liked the p.o.v. that you used. it was a good effect to the story you wrote here.

great job. ^_^

Oh, this is good ^^ i like your writing style...are you going to continue it, or is it just a one-shot?

Is this a one shot? Anyways its a good story either ways. Hope you write more to it.