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| Reviews for Unfinished Business |
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   It's All About Them 4/15/13 . chapter 2hmmm... who is this Larnia girl... |
| It's All About Them 4/15/13 . chapter 1 one chapter down and all is good... |
| Olimpia 11/29/11 . chapter 7 Hey Wow im so glad uve picked the story up again! I absolutely loved in! I suppose its because i love SWAT! But great story and great updates! I think.. wow... i think i checked this fic out 3 year ago maybe! But it is still amazing! Hoping for more :D |
| Simoman 9/21/06 . chapter 6 Good chapter! Great emotion shown! Keep it up! |
| DreamShadows 12/10/05 . chapter 6 Oh that story was so good! I almost cried, especially at the memories. I hope that you update soon! |
| BelgiumWaffleMaker55 11/9/05 . chapter 6 Wow, that's really awesome. If they were to ever make a sequel, the movie-makers should consult you and what you've written. Good action, story, just like the movie. I really enjoyed it, and I'll anticipate the coming chapters. |
| fuwa fuwa shite iru 9/8/05 . chapter 6 sorry i didn't review i was so into the story i couldn't tear my eyes away. i needed to keep reading. i like the story thus so far! |
| fuwa fuwa shite iru 9/8/05 . chapter 3 HIS WIFE!AUGGHGH! keep writing! |
| fuwa fuwa shite iru 9/8/05 . chapter 2 i loved it! just like my first review keep writing! |
| fuwa fuwa shite iru 9/8/05 . chapter 1 I loved it. you need to keep writin mor, and more, and more, and more, and more, and more ,and more... |
| Soccer-Bitch 9/4/05 . chapter 6 cool story. i liked it. i hope that you update soon. _ |
| MartinaCruz 6/9/05 . chapter 6 Loved this chapter and so happy you decided to continue this story! Cant wait to see what happens next! |
| MartinaCruz 5/28/05 . chapter 5 Hey I love this story! And I know that its been a really long time but... I really want to know what happens! Please finish it! |
| busigt-81 8/6/04 . chapter 5 Its a really good storie please contiune |
| Capt.Cow 7/19/04 . chapter 5 YES! DEfinitely go on! Why are you still here reading this review? Go on, you're meant to be writing you have chapters to finish! |
