|Reviews for Unfinished Business|
| It's All About Them 4/15/13 . chapter 2
hmmm... who is this Larnia girl...
| It's All About Them 4/15/13 . chapter 1
one chapter down and all is good...
| Olimpia 11/29/11 . chapter 7
Hey Wow im so glad uve picked the story up again! I absolutely loved in! I suppose its because i love SWAT! But great story and great updates! I think.. wow... i think i checked this fic out 3 year ago maybe! But it is still amazing! Hoping for more :D
| Simoman 9/21/06 . chapter 6
Good chapter! Great emotion shown! Keep it up!
| DreamShadows 12/10/05 . chapter 6
Oh that story was so good!
I almost cried, especially at the memories.
I hope that you update soon!
| BelgiumWaffleMaker55 11/9/05 . chapter 6
Wow, that's really awesome. If they were to ever make a sequel, the movie-makers should consult you and what you've written. Good action, story, just like the movie. I really enjoyed it, and I'll anticipate the coming chapters.
| fuwa fuwa shite iru 9/8/05 . chapter 6
sorry i didn't review i was so into the story i couldn't tear my eyes away. i needed to keep reading. i like the story thus so far!
| fuwa fuwa shite iru 9/8/05 . chapter 3
HIS WIFE!AUGGHGH! keep writing!
| fuwa fuwa shite iru 9/8/05 . chapter 2
i loved it! just like my first review keep writing!
| fuwa fuwa shite iru 9/8/05 . chapter 1
I loved it. you need to keep writin mor, and more, and more, and more, and more, and more ,and more...
| Soccer-Bitch 9/4/05 . chapter 6
cool story. i liked it. i hope that you update soon. _
| MartinaCruz 6/9/05 . chapter 6
Loved this chapter and so happy you decided to continue this story! Cant wait to see what happens next!
| MartinaCruz 5/28/05 . chapter 5
Hey I love this story! And I know that its been a really long time but... I really want to know what happens! Please finish it!
| busigt-81 8/6/04 . chapter 5
Its a really good storie please contiune
| Capt.Cow 7/19/04 . chapter 5
YES! DEfinitely go on! Why are you still here reading this review? Go on, you're meant to be writing you have chapters to finish!