 tenken22 2009-10-24 . chapter 2Unbelievably sweet, I'm getting diabetes! |
 dello11 2009-09-02 . chapter 2Adorable, and the ending was golden. :D |
 random person 2009-08-30 . chapter 2 wow, this was really good. I keep laughing whenever brock and tracey teased ash and misty. aaml, hehe |
 Steve 2009-06-14 . chapter 2 Soo cute! I don't know why more people haven't reviewed this. I read it at least every few months.
Great great story! I loved the "dear Hat..." bit, and the ""… I… I think I… hit my mouth when I fell down," Misty stammered uncertainly, wide-eyed at her own words. Gently, she touched her shaking finger to her lips. Both Ash and Misty knew that she hadn't cut or bruised her mouth, and both knew that the other knew the same." super charming!
"Brock "tsk"ed a bit as he examined the wound. He noticed that the hat on Ash's head was smeared with dried blood, and realized how Ash had stopped the blood flow." <-also cute.
Great work!! |
 Aiselne Phoenix Nocturnus 2009-05-14 . chapter 2(Overall review) How cute! Considering I don't know the first thing about tennis I still fell in love with this story. Your descriptive writing helped readers unfamiliar with tennis to still appreciate this fanfic, and I appreciated it. Ash and Misty were so adorable in this story, and I couldn't stop laughing at Brock and Tracey's "Ash and Misty Love" teases (very clever). Ash's clumsiness mixed with Misty's temper sure made for some hilarious moments on the court. The ending was also very sweet. You definately have a knack for writing some super-adorable fanfics! |
 licoricejellybean 2009-05-01 . chapter 2truly hilarious. I thought the first part of the first chapter dragged just a little, but the rest of it had the perfect mix of humor and sweetness.
and i think the battle hymn of the tennis lovers is the best name for a song EVER.
awesome, really enjoyed this! |
 Soundspeed 2009-03-11 . chapter 2Brilliant. I don't think I could more accurately describe this story with any other word. Great writing, great concept, and amazing execution. The ending was a little predictable, but you know what, I don't even mind, it was that good. Just brilliant. |
 Ronmione x3 2009-02-13 . chapter 2This is, officially, the best fanfiction I've ever read in the history of forever. =-) OHMYLORD. I seriously cried at the ASH AND MISTY LOVE because I was laughing so hard. Eek. x3
-worships you- |
 Daniellenaruto 2008-10-25 . chapter 1 OMG so awesome and cute^^
I especially enjoy the part when Tracey and Brock started joking them!
and to add, that tennis is, after all, my favourite sport! [what a coincidence, don´t you think?]
Anywhoo continue to write this amazing stories, cuz like a always say: AAML/romance/and comedy in the same fic, is always amusing to read! ^_~
Thanks to you i found inspiration to write fic about them! [not kidding ^^]
infortunaly,[is it right?] is in Portuguese [since i´m from Portugal] and is posted on a Brasilian forum so...
That´s the only reason i dont write for this especific site... -_-
KISS |
 PokePikaPal 2008-08-23 . chapter 2every time i read this i just love it! it definitely has all the things that make a good AAML: bickering, one of them helping the other at just the perfect moment, and of course, good humor from Pikachu! applause for this fic! |
 0x Emo Contestshipper x0 2008-08-04 . chapter 1I remember reading this a few years ago when I was like 10, it was like the first fanfic I ever read. I loved it and still do and I love the ending. |
 AAMLfan 2008-07-04 . chapter 2Awesome! |
 Shuutastic 2008-05-24 . chapter 2Aha! I knew where that was going the moment I saw what that Ash and Misty were inexperienced. Great job at using puns and working in the fandom term. :)
Very nice and cute. |
 haha whats so funny 2008-05-03 . chapter 2aw so sweet :] |
 Vilya0 2008-04-23 . chapter 2Prepare for a review! Make it quadruple yahoo!
Cute! I never understood tennis but still! I loved the "I don't think I'd like to eat a tennis ball." And the birth of AAML! And Pikachu not liking the dishwasher. Speaking of which, though it's more concerning "Misty's schedule", I always thought Pikachu chose everyone's appellation based on how they sounded in Japanese while not shuffling the syllables too much, but I like your explanation, with Pikapi as a term of endearment and not a pronunciation close to Satoshi. ^_^
I'm on a roll, see you in my next review! I'm signing off again...! *bing* |