This story is really sweet. I love your perspective on the theory of love. Just out of curiosity, who had you meant for Hermione to be talking about? I noticed, that you mentioned, that she was 21, and the other person, was 14. Anyway,Good Luck!

so beautiful & so true.. i really love how you are able to bring out such beautiful emotions & the love you describe is as real as if it were ur own & all consuming...thank you!
~carica

*scratches head* Huh. Very interesting. Who's the guy? (If it's a guy...lol)

The slap that you mentioned makes me think Draco...and perhaps that might make some sense, what with the whole "childish" thing...but I'm a little confused, as I thought you said also that she was 21 and he was 14. But no, rereading that I think you just jumped in time a bit. So I think this might be lacking a teeny bit of clarity.

But, as I said: interesting fic!

You know, the reason I clicked on this was because I saw the summary and it made me want to read more. At first, I couldn't figure out the pov, I was stuck on figuring out who it was as I read this beautiful prose. Then, when I found out it was Hermione, all the words fell into place, because in a way it does sound like her, a serious, self analizing Hermione in love. I wonder though, what pairing it is, although it hardly matters to the story, who could make Hermione feel like she's kissing her own child?

Mia

READ IT! LOVED IT! WRITE MORE SOON!

Wow. I really like this. The style is wonderful, but it leaves one question; Who is she writing to?
Harry? Draco? Neville? But overall I do really like this story and I say if you can, continue with it.

Kudos,

Jenna Kat

who was she writing to? my guess is either harry or draco. it was really good, i enjoy your writing :)

wow, very kool n sweet, but who is she tlkin bout... harry? draco? ron?...anywaz ur very talented great job

That was beautiful. Truly. It really moved me. It's a wonderful showcase of your writing talent, and it's something to take to heart. It's one of those things that when you read it, it really hits you deep because you know it's the truth, you know it's not just a story but a part of life, what she's talking about. I don't know if that made any sense.

I can't quite figure out who Hermione is talking to but I like it anyways. It was well written. Update some of your other stories soon.

Luv Always

~~Michelle Marie Maire

Wow, this was really sweet and really well written, seriously, you did a great job on this!

Aw, this was really sweet!
I like it.
-Violet

wow... its so poetic... yet there is some humor to it. well done!

who is hermoine talking to? it is hermoine talking, rite?

just wondering, is this supposed to be h/hr? or hr/anyone. it was good no matter what! you are a great writer. -leah