Beautiful poetry! Gotta wonder if where I can learn more about Elizabethian English. (It's my favorite form of english XD)

I feel the same with grape soda! Even though it dosen't have caffeine or real surger for that matter...WHAT'S IN THIS STUFF!

I like that poem and how u used an old style that not many people would use. If u have time I hope u can read my poem the dam

Oo... ok.. lol (presantly highly caffinated himself) 1 thing is for sure! i sure wouldnt like living in those speaking times (what does anon mean? "checks online dictionary") ... this could take a while, but pleasent poem

Oh, this is very pretty. I understood it all, frankly, because just recently I finished reading The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet in English class. Beautiful poem. Bittersweet.

Oh, it's so pretty! i really like it. good inspiration. i really need a site...hm.

Well, this is well written poetry. I don't have any complaints, aside from me not knowing some words here. The Mountain Dew thing at the end was weird, but funny. Keep it up!

Krazy Jimbo

Hey, we recently did a unit of work in English to do with Elizabthan England. Heh. Not like that matters but what the heck? _ I loved the poem. Very creative. Of course this is coming from somebody who could never write a good poem if her life depended on it but trust me on this, it was great. Ciao!

Silver

BOOGALOO!

Soz i idn't get to read this beforehand. i would yhave if i didn't have like, 7 assignments due in one week. i liked this heaps although i dont understabd elizabethian english very well, at least i know what ur talking about .

Till next time. Ciao!

Kat

Woah. Very cool. Is it iambic pentameter of just free verse? Or is none of the above. I'm often scorned because of this knowledge. lol. Not really. Seriously though, I liked your use of rhythm and it flowed quite nicely. Good job. Pax!

Nice poem, I liked it alot. :)

I like it! I can never write in Elizabethan english... O.O You're very talented...

I really liked that poem... Yes, Link does belong with Zelda... I liked the Elizabethan English! I'm very fond of that kind of thing, but I don't write it because I don't know how it goes... sigh... But great poem! REALLY GOOD.

Wow. This was awsome! I write poetry too... but I'm not very good. Happy writing!

This is very nice-I really like the language, and that 'sentiment of eld' it evokes. Good work!

- Selah