Poor Bruce . . .

Well done. I think you've got closer to how I see Batman than any other I've read so far.

This story is wonderful. I like the imagery, Bruce's inner thoughts (though they are depressing), and Diana's statement of faith/love at the end. The Prayer of Saint Francis of Assisi is beautiful, and the context in which Diana says it is very touching. Thanks for the thoughtful story.

This is so late after you have posted this. So late that it makes me wonder if there's any chance you read it...

I love this text, it's made me sad and got me thinking. You have an unique way of writing. You've heard this before. You might ask yourself why the reply. Cause I can;t stay indifferent to words beauty...

Beautiful. For once, an author that doesn't make WW out to be whiney and nagging.

wow...very good!

I like it! I like it! Here are some quotes that might inspire you to write more:

Love takes off masks that we fear we cannot live without and know we cannot live within.
-James A. Baldwin

I imagine one of the reasons people cling to their hates so stubbornly is because they sense, once hate is gone, they will be forced to deal with pain.
-James A. Baldwin

Friendship with ones self is all important, because without it one cannot be friends with anyone else in the world.
-Eleanor Roosevelt

It isn't enough to talk about peace. One must believe in it. And it isn't enough to believe in it. One must work at it.
-Eleanor Roosevelt

Peace cannot be achieved through violence, it can only be attained through understanding.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Beautiful. I love it. Excellent job, keep it up!
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A beautiful fic. Very, very powerful. Thank you for writing a great for Bats and WW.

Flaeron

That was awesome

good

This was excellent. Kudos on the descriptions of the sensations as much as anything: smells, physical feelings etc - those are very difficult to write.

Wow. What great writing. Its certainly a bit darker than I usually enjoy but I really like the way you handled the BM/WW thing.

Absolutely amazing and incredible. Fantastic characterization. Amazing inner thoughts and dilalouge. The BMWW here is extrodinary.

It's short but deep and sweet! Please write another bruce/diana fanfic or maybe a sequel.