Im writing about your first part of one good deed as i thought it was a little confusing. who are these pepole and why are they trying to kill the z fighters
also why does this person hurt the namek.

It's not often on that I find a genuinly good story...especially one that includes Piccolo that DOESN'T include either a self insert or a Mary Sue. I have to say that this was one of the most intriguing fics that I have read about him. I definately have alot of questions...(which I will hold off on asking until I read the Errant Exile) Again, great story! Love your character interactions, and brilliant ideas (such as the diacha) And especially young Piccolo! Anywho...I'm off to read Errant!

Wow, I was very impressed by this fic and really enjoyed reading it. I now move on to the others and can't wait to see how Khri's story blossoms.

LATER.ROGUEFURY

we! picolo ness... i will finish this later i gots to get offline. good job.

Aw...I liked this story. ^^ I liked how you let people not only see into Khri's life, but into Piccolo's child years and into Sai's thoughts.

~TCWD

i'm surprised, but i like this. going to read the other stories now. p.s. in case you're curious, i found your stories through a link in deviantart.

Interesting..nice ending I look forward to reading the second part of your story. I like Khri's character more and more! Reminds me of a certain namekian.

Heh little Piccolo sure is a handful! Nice job I like his personality as well as Khri's!

Nice good job! Your story is becoming more and more interesting!

Very good once again your sure keeping the readers clinging to their computer chairs!

Very interesting so far I like it. I haven't really paid attention to stories involving Piccolo as a young boy but this one is very good.

I LOVE this story. It was short but extremely well written. I congradulate you on this fine achievment. I am now going to read the next story you have, with high expectations.

Aww so sweet, I think O.o so it's not done yet eh? So what's left of the mission? and will we see jr. again? update soon! ^x^