 luxor 2004-06-21 . chapter 1Yes, you're right. A confrontation or "showdown" is *exactly* what Grissom needs. He doesn't seem to respond to unspoken subtelty that well, does he? What great dialogue ... I love how you bring up all the little things that G has said or done with regards to Sara. She is strong, determined and just pissed enough to not let it go this time. Fitting that it should all play out in his office too. How much would I *give* to have your scenario play out on TV!?!?! Excellent job. |
 Danaides 2004-06-21 . chapter 1This was really good. I am a big fan of your fics - they encouraged me to start writing. Looking forward to more.. |
 jtbwriter 2004-06-20 . chapter 1Ok-that was good-what a go-round-but good!
I like that Sara stuck it out-went toe-to-toe until she got it through that thick, wonderful man that he either put up or shut up!
Thanks for a good read! |
 annieb 2004-06-20 . chapter 1Perfect! As my dd said the other day..."boys are stupid" You brought him around just right. |
 Love Of My Life 2004-06-20 . chapter 1That was good, would love to see some kind of resolution like that on the show... oh well a girl can dream. :) |
 Rach 2004-06-20 . chapter 1 intresting! good one although I wonder if it will last.
keep up the god work |
 surrendersomething 2004-06-20 . chapter 1Hee. Go Sara. What more needs to be said? Great confrontation - amusing as well as serious. |
 mauralin13 2004-06-20 . chapter 1 Wow. I loved Grissom's exasperation! This is so very well written. I love reading your stories Anansay! Great job! |
 leddy 2004-06-20 . chapter 1 Very nice. Exactly what needs to happen on the show. |
 Nessa Owen 2004-06-20 . chapter 1It would be nice if this conversation could take place on the show, wouldn't it? Nice job. Thanks. |
 2004-06-20 . chapter 1 aww how cute...you're one of my fav G/S writers! what a lovely story..not too choppy at all! |
 2004-06-20 . chapter 1 aww how cute...you're one of my fav G/S writers! what a lovely story..not too choppy at all! |
 CSIShipperGirl 2004-06-19 . chapter 1You SO totally rock!! I loved every bit of it! Now if only TPTB would play this out on screen......It was great. You found the holy grail on this one. I hope you find it again soon for your other works. ;) Thanks for sharing!
Suzy |
 Ricker23 2004-06-19 . chapter 1Anansay--Great story as always! Gotta love a stammering Grissom!
:) Rica |
 Taletha 2004-06-19 . chapter 1Good to hear from you! I was laughing out loud at Grissom's confused state! Love you twist of words! |