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   loverain0117 5/24/08 . chapter 18i like this one too! i read on ur profile that u draw...i do too...wish i could see some of ur drawings... |
| brightfairy8 7/16/07 . chapter 18 looks like u haven't updated in ages! plz update soon! it's a really good fanfic! |
| brightfairy8 7/16/07 . chapter 7 i just wanted...to say...that...er...well...THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST MAZING STORIES EVR! |
| brightfairy8 7/16/07 . chapter 4 mistakes? how about mispelling breakfast BREAKFATS (hahaha i m trying soo hard not to burst out laughing hahahahaha) |
| brightfairy8 7/16/07 . chapter 2 hehehe the way u typed breakfast made me crack up (BREAKFATS HAHAHA) |
| brightfairy8 7/16/07 . chapter 1 haha he's still a slow poke XD |
| Illicit Trance 12/8/06 . chapter 1 Hey. I'm really sorry to say this. Actually, No, I'm not. Not at all. You suck. You REALLY do. How old are you? You write like you're ten. There is absolutely no plot, and some chapters you posted were so pointless. Not to mention your sentence structures are terrible. So is your grammar. And your dialogue. Your use of japanese as well. Basically everything! ...but then again, nothing will be good unless you have a plot, dear. This whole story is put together sloppily and carelessly, and it seems like you are out to get some cheap praise instead of actually improving your writing. Do you think you've actually made any progress? Sorry to burst your bubble. You haven't. Now, I know you're going to moan and bitch about this flame, but honestly, complain all you want, but show some improvement the next time I stumble upon your stories. THINK OF A PLOT before you begin typing! Heed my advice. It'll do you some good. |
| alexis 10/22/06 . chapter 18 great |
| sasukerox 11/13/05 . chapter 1 please update! my neopets is twobit_10 and soda_100 |
| lia-lia 10/19/05 . chapter 18 hehe, very interesting. plz continue! lol, hehe, poor kakashi... |
| gambomaster 10/17/05 . chapter 18 Oh, my GOD! your story is like so FUNNY, I just love the part where sasuke is praying and the part when he said he's going to kill his bro, I just start crackin up(and my mum looks at me weirdly)_, I LOVE yer Fic and I am always waiting |
| LossxOfxWords 9/25/05 . chapter 18 update soon, please! |
| LossxOfxWords 9/25/05 . chapter 9 hi! I totaly love this story! I have a user on neopets! My name is 'sakurachan90210' or '_sk8er_chick_101', either one, neomail me! |
| aznriceangel 9/2/05 . chapter 18 me really really really like! please updat soon! NeoPets user name: inuyashafangirl3 |
| Keskio 8/19/05 . chapter 18 plz update! |
