it's a bit confusing, and not really funny. i like your other story's better.i do think it's pretty good tho.

*lol* i gotta admit...the humor's not *that* bad _ mebbe you should stick to the suicidal stuff...hehehe...j'p j'p. it's kewL actually...finish writing dangit! well...hope you did well on finals...i'm praying for an A (and mrs. king said that she's curving her final cuz everyone sucked...so each of us get...like...9 extra points...::smiles crazily::) so newaize...tell me when you wanna work on the frames & have an awesome weekend! _

Heh, Heh, paintball? tis funny... cant wait till part 2!

Jenny

bwhahahahahahahahahahahaha! even though i have never been paintballing in my life, but great fic! write part two soon!

*deep breath*KWWEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!(translated)!

:D :D :D *whezzing* this is great! You *can* too write humour! Never will you cease to amaze me...lovely archive, hostess of the fanfiction contest, talented authoress, Paint-ball fighter...! Since Folken is so smart at strategy he's just got to win! Ahh...can't wait to see what DILLY has in store for everyone! Do *not* worry about the cut-off review-I've accidentally submitted blank reviews before and EVIL FIDO will not let me review again...Tatter Hood, if you're reading this-I'm sorry! Rubie-I too, believe there's nothing wrong with writing long reviews. :D logging off for tonight with a happy smile! Margot

WAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAaaaa... oh man. i'm crying. That was good.

LMAO! OMG... that was *gasps for breath* FUNNY! Hilarious! Just get the next part out soon! Hehe... Capture the Flag and paintballing... *sighs in envy*