I was wondering if you are going to finish this story?

That was a very interesting twist with Sam going back to get charlie. I liked the idea in someways. I loved the baby idea. I hope you write a sequel to this sometime.

Are you going to write sequal to this? 'Cause if you don't it'll drive me crazy with the all what ifs.

this is a really cute story! good job :)

I enjoyed this story very much but there one huge flaw: it MUST. have. a SEQUEL! This is an AU I could enjoy; shippy as heck, but with other potential e.g. why would the Asgard risk pre-consensual genetic fiddling AND time travel to preserve O'Neill's genes? That's... so huge; incredibly risky on moral and practical planes... And the whole O'Neill reaquiring fatherhood role. And the Daniel adjusting to O'Neill as Carter's sig other thing. I could rattle off more, but ::hopeful look:: I'll leave that to the author. One suggestion: make it neither too easy nor too hard for the characters, if you choose to sequel this.

That was so cute. And odd. But deffinitly cute.

the oddnes is still there though...not quite masked by the cuteness... *grin*

Thanks for a great read.

I really enjoyed this story. I liked how you had her gone for a long time but she was 'okay' It'd be interesting to see a sequel to this, but I guess we'll all just have to use our own imaginations!

This is a great story. I can't wait for the sequel, there has to be a sequel...please! I can't wait so please, please, please hurry :)

Wow...*gasp*. That was... a... a... amazing! This story left me absolutely speechless, and the only thing I didn't like was the fact that it was too short! *pouts* [Although I'm sure that 300 pages wouldn't be enough for me :)] I read the story over at Gateworld and will keep watching here for a sequel (*hint, hint*), 'cause I wanna see every chapter as it is posted. I just can't wait! *waits 10 seconds, then checks to see if sequel has been posted yet* What? You haven't posted the sequel yet? Well, *pleez* hurry, LOL! - SamLover

great story, lots of nice unexpected twists and turns.

wow! great fic

You keep leaving my at a loss for words. It's not really fair, you know. I'm used to having a large vocabulary, and thus used to constructing immensely long and involved reviews.
But your stories leave me with a very simple, very straightforward reaction. The only words floating around in my head are "Wow" and "What? There's no more?"
So I hope you'll grace the SGI fanfic community with more of your gifts. And I hope you'll do it really, really soon.

It is great so far! And I of course want "happily ever after," but it shouldn't be too easy. Sam has been playing the parental role for Charlie, but a grade-schooler is much different than a baby. I think it would be interesting to see her make that adjustment. And will sam have any doubts about her and jack when charlie is reintroduced to his mother?
And finally, why did the Asgard do all of this? I find it hard to believe that they were simply being charitable. Is there an alterior--though still well meaning--motive?
That's all i've got for now. Good luck!

you shud do a sequal to this it's good and it deserves one