Well, I do have to say that this was a great start.

Mind me, I've always liked the Marauders stories, though I don't have any written.

The names fit nicely, and it's good that Lily has her group of friends.

I will just keep reading, good work!

I liked this a lot, though I do think you brought in just a *few* too many new characters. Also, I wish you hadn't skipped so many years. Other than that, very good. When's the Animai/werewolf thing gonna come into play?

WRITE MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! Very, very good! Hurry with the next part!

Cool! I'm glad there's actually a cool potions teacher for once. Have you noticed that almost *everyone* makes the potions teacher rude and sarcastic? Very good story, I'm off to read the next part!

That was really good! i've never read your old version, but I loved this! Please put the next part up soon, the cliffhanger will kill me if you don't. and try to go more into their personalities. I don't really feel like I know them yet!

Whoa whoa whoa! Where's the rest? Oh, this drives me nuts! But anyway, this is a nice beginning. But why doesn't anyone *finish* stories before they post them anymore? *sighs deeply*

Ohhhh! I REALLLY HATE cliffs! I hope she gets placed in either Ravenclaw or Gryffindor! Post the next part soon please! :O)