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| Sean Malloy-1 2007-01-23 ch 9,  | abuseGreat job on this story so far, I hope you'll add more chapters very soon. I can't wait for more. |
| SSJ Guyver1 2007-01-19 ch 2, | abuseIt's a good story,... it really is. It's a damn shame it seems to be dead however. But one thing caught my eye ; "I would like to wait until after _collage_ to decide Mr. Tendo, if that's okay with you." What collage are they talking about? Is Kasumi making a Collage of old Ranma pictures or something? |
| gaul1 2006-03-03 ch 9, | abusegreat chapter, byes |
| goku 2006-02-26 ch 4, anon. | abusethe are some rather glareing grammer mistakes (the fact that i noticed them should say quite a bit) also you have majorly changed who kasumi was its hardly kasumi anymore |
| KATO 2006-02-24 ch 9, anon. | abuseGreat story but you really need to look into getting a pre-reader. You've got alot of words that are misspelt or have letters missing and substitution is a problem (eg being instead of begin) you need to work on. Otherwise keep up the good work looking forward to more chapters |
| The Eromancer 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abusenice fic, stupid though, Ranma should INBRACE HIS DARK SIDE! |
| Ryo-chan wolfgirl 2006-02-24 ch 9, | abusePlease write more I like this story alot. Serves Genma right, the **. Are Ryoga and Shampoo a couple or something? Please update soon. |
| Vampwriter 2006-02-24 ch 9, | abuseGood chapter, but work on spell and grammer checking. |
| Bobboky 2006-02-24 ch 9, | abusenice |
| Bobboky 2005-09-11 ch 8, | abusepretty good |
| The Nameless Author 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abusei enjoy this story a lot |
| migele 2005-04-13 ch 8, | abuseyou really eally need some betas, grammar is partly off. try not to rush the story that much, take more time with developing things. read ya later. |
| Sylin 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abuseEhe, this is the first review I've remembered to actually submit. Amyway, I really enjoyed reading this story, and I hope you continue it soon. |
| dennisud 2005-03-24 ch 1, | abuseSo far i can follow the plot but there's too many missing words and the misspelled words and sentence structure has to improve. dennisud |
| Innortal 2005-03-24 ch 8, | abuseCan't wait for the next chapter. It is really a great story. I like the way the Neko-were is done. I am left wondering who Nodoka's fried is, as well as when other promised girls will arrive. I say go for making Ukyo Ranma's blood brother/sister, depending if Kimiko informed him of the differences. Keep going. Innortal |