marvelous- oh what can i say about this story- you got vegeta to the tee- and the rest of it was funny and poignant- loved it really-

Probably one of the best first person stories I've read in this section. Good job! I really think you got into Vegeta's head in this one shot!

Aw that was cute. It was not only funny but it also had a heart.

I thought that your story was very cute, and i hope that you write some more like it.0_0

this was HILARIOUS! i loved it! :)

oh man, that was so funny. it was just funny, with a little father- son moment, but mainly funny. though with it being vegeta i think bulma would have congratulated him instead of asking if he could do better. amazing story

Hello,

this is really a nice story, thank you very much. You involved lots of characters and are pretty good at describing and showing every one's personnality. And that one is quite close to the one Toriyama's created.

Hope I'll re more fics from you,

aww, that was so kawaii...

Gosh, Vegeta dressed up as barney...X_X uhh...bad mental image...

how exactly does barney look like? ... ah well.

I loved this one-shot a lot. It was quite funny, and touching at the same time.

I love how you 'sarcasticized' Vegeta, making him more interesting.

Rock on!

Ja.

Wonderful! I like the way you wrote it. It's definitely going in my favorites. )

aw! hehe _ this is the funniest and cutest story about the fatherly son moments between vegeta and trunks ive ever read.

Ohmygoodness! That was excellent! I loved it. Very, very cute, hilarious, and Vegeta was very in character. The closet part was priceless.

I loved the ending scene, it was written very well, nice job on the interaction between Trunks and Vegeta. I really like your writing style; you're a wonderful writer!

Aw! WAFFINESS! Haha... SO cute! I LOVE Vegeta. The whole 'shut up and go to sleep' thing was so him. Lol.. maybe you hsould write just a short cute Bulma/Vegeta thing. That would be cute. _ Vegeta as Barney... I was on my back laughing. Haha. Loved it SO much!

Happy writing!

Fallen Fantasist

Hey this was really good. I REALLY need to show my friend this. I personally dont like Vegita but this was really cute. It made me laugh and at the same time feel bad for poor little Trunks...and Vegita in the Barney cotsume _;;

But cute, I really liked the style u used.

It was so CUTE! I hope this wasn't a one shot! Hope you write more chapters in the future... Yay! Barney!

i didn't realize you were still writing on ...

hey this is CUTE teehee. i wonder where you got the idea for BARNEY...