Cool!! You like depressing Guyver fics don't you? Always figured Sho was more powerful than Agito. Poor Earth!

That was good. Sad, but reall, really good.

Intense

Absolutely mindblowing; this is worthy enough to be made Guyver anime itself; you weave a masterful story of a final fall of Chronos, and the Guyver who knew he had to destroy everything to snuff it. The characters are well fleshed out, even though much not delving is done, and that trick is much, much appreciated- the writing is par excellence; I can sympathize with ALL these characters; even the evil Alkanphel himself since his current situation is so pathetic. VERY GOOD WORK! I only have one question though; I would like to know if you just invented all this, or if it came from the Guyver manga, and if so, where is there a translation?

That was intense! Sho was more like a devil than a demon in this.

I like it. It`s sad but very good.

Congratulations.

Your fanfiction is the first to ever make me cry.
That was a beautiful story; a beautiful ending.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

The raw emotion of each of the characters, was just, mind blowing, I can picture them, no, I can feel their emotion.

Thank you.

So beautifull, so sad; I love it. Absolutely amazing, one of the best things I've ever read.

Excuse me for my languae, but Holy **. That was freaking increadible. Unbeleavable. Amazing.Nothing could have been better for an ending of the guyver.

Excuse me for my languae, but Holy **. That was freaking increadible. Unbeleavable. Amazing.Nothing could have been better for an ending of the guyver.

... Whoa, talk about bitter... but you do capture beautifully the demons hidden deep within Sho, Mizuki, Tetsuro, and everyone else. Great work.

O_O

What can I say...

I'm speechless...