heeheehee! awesome chapter as usual! XD XD aw... poor cloud... :( anyway update soon! :D

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Aww, loving the story! Please update soon, I'm dying to read some more!

YAY! AND UPDATE! bah, i'm real sorry for taking so long to review, but just recenlty i managed to start reading it again. yay! oh, so is this... like a novelization of game, but noe cloud is with them? because that's really interesting... anyway i hope you update soon! because i steal read your fics! :D

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Please keep writing I really like this story!

I love how you mix both Japanese and English ,I also hope you keep writeing. You've got me hooked and I want to see if Cloud and Leon fight any time soon ,and If Cloud finds Kira. By the way I looked at your art you are wonderful.

you better continue with this story... or... or else! (empty threat of course but whatever, just update soon)

This is by far my favorite chapter! I love your attention the the detail in how Cloud is now dressed but I love how it's unfolding!

Very nicely done. It's a wonderful read. Not so much on a page that you can't take it all in and yet just enough to keep you reading through the chapters.

I really love your attention to detail. Plus I love how your bring out their personalities! Awsome writing skills ^_^-

YO! B.e.d! It's me, Sairyo!
Love this story!
Hope you update again soon!
I'm like stalking you on here and DeviantART! XP

ehehe! i was keeping my eye on this ficcy, and when i last check in, it's updated! YAY! omg.. that was so sweet...
hehehe
that ending was so coolies!
anyway, keep up the good work, and update soon! ;)

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this is really good. but some the lines were kinda confusing to me, cause i didn't know which lines were who's.

Oi! Good fic! Kumi was slightly marysueish. *hides and shutters* But shes a great char, expand on her a bit more, she reminds me of Rinoa a bit. Loved the refrence to Rinoa too. Kepe it up, must have more fic lol!
Kadaj: Your so rude...
>_> Shad'up!
Kadaj: gr...

wow... that was one of the best stories i've ever read! ah! i wish i could write like that.
u have a great way of representing people like they are real people, not like their puppets or aomething.
great story, and i hope u continue this REAL
soon!

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i like...update! and uh...when is more leon/cloud stuff comin? u know...like yoai? i think this is a yoai fic...*confused* well update soon!