Awesome first chapter

I love the changes you made to the ending, they're perfect. And I still love all the metaphors for Grissom's sad life in this story. Poor man.

Ok-this was a good story-not very satisfying at the end-but at least hopeful!

I love that they nailed Jenkins at the end with the simplest evidence!

Thanks for a good read!

Very nice wrap-up of this story - you kept us guessing until the absolute last paragraph! I especially liked the lines in this chapter, "They worked so well with each other, communicating with gestures or looks; sometimes only due to some sort of instictive knowledge of what the other was thinking. Why couldn't he communicate with her like this outside of work." Very good observation! Nice story. I liked it!

I wish I could say I liked this-but even I think Gris wouldn't have been this tongue-tied.

I know it's in the vein of what everyone else is writing-but I wish the backbone that Gris is allowed to exhibit in the other updates is missing here.

Thanks for Brass being the good friend as usual to both Sara and Gris-looks like his words are going to be needed again.

Thanks for a quick update-now where are you going to do with this?

This is a really good fic. Interesting casefile and all the angst Sara is feeling over her decision. I'm curious to see what Grissom does next.

Please do not let Sara leave Grissom. Update soon!

Sigh. I can't believe there is still one more chapter to go. I love the emotional road that Grissom has been on. Your plot is very good, and you've captured the voices of the characters pretty well. I like Sara's internal monologue. For a non-native speaker, your use of the language is pretty good. The few errors I spotted could easily be fixed, if you ever need a Beta reader, I'd be willing to help out.

Well, the gauntlet has been thrown! It will be interesting to see how this unfolds. Will Grissom give up or will he figure out how to win Sara back... Can't wait to find out!

Awesome story!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
:-)

I like this story and I hope there's more.

Great story so far, i can't wait to see where it goes. And, for the record, your english is lovely (better than some of the natives).

Please be Grissom at the door, he needs to talk to Sara and let her know what is going on with him and this case. Sara giving Grissom some serious TLC.

I'm enjoying this, I hope you continue soon :)

Really like this story...hope to see an update soon.
:) Rica